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New Chapter Added To The Mirror Of Erised!


Title: The Mirror of Erised
Author:: recyclemyheart
Rating: PG-13 or light R
Spoilers: SS, CoS, PoA, GoF, OoTP
Shipper: Draco/Harry
Summary: Harry is growing up. He has seen more than most boys his age, he has felt and loss so much more. Lost in a spiraling depression, he is thrown out by a sudden realization: he no longer see's his parent's in the Mirror of Erised. He see's Draco Malfoy?
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me. They belong to JKR. :) The Lyrics also don't belong to me, they belong to Bright Eyes.
Author's Notes: If you have critique on my style, let me know. I am having a few friends Beta read the first three chapters. I have been waiting for almost a week to have this one done, but since the other three had to be done first, this one comes last. It'll be beta read i'd say next week. If you don't like minor spelling and grammar mistakes don't read this chapter for two weeks.I was going to wait but I couldn't! I loved this chapter, and the funny thing is, it came so easily.

I picked the lyrics for this chapter, because if you look closely, Harry feels very much on the sidelines. Plus, death and heaven is addressed here.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
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I would like to announce Harry Potter Fanfic Review, offically has a website Site
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Well, some info has been requested from me here it is:
- My prefences on Fanfics, is all, I like all fanfics, of all ratings. I like all couples, all genre's and types.
- There is really nothing Spacific I despise in a fanfic. As I said I review on plot, which means plot devolopement. In that I look for plot whole, character development and the such.
- Reasons why I am doing this: I've read so many fanfics it's not funny, my friends think I've got an addiction or somthing, probally do. I spend alot of time reading, sometimes I get so into it, I don't sleep or eat for days.
- Here is a sample short review for a one shot I read radomly just for this purpose: That's right Draco Shake that: This is a fanfic for the Draco/Ginny lovers. It's not canon, for those who are a stinker about that. But well written. I like the way the author introduced the fic, by describing the relationship between the two. This fanfic is based after the war, and I liked who the author gave reasons for the canon characters to act, out of canon. The fic was a little jumpy with the scences, and could use to describe thingd a bit more. Also lacked a certain flow of things, the dance scene could have been better. I give it 2.5/5 smiles :):):
Current Mood:
blah 2.5/5
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All you have to do is post a submission here, either, the fic, the link, or you can e-mail it to me at chibikitth(at)gmail(dot)com
Current Mood:
excited excited
Current Music:
T.V
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This is the first post I hereby Officially announce this Community as open!
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